A gymnasium, a playing field, a battle field, a factory, a forge, an alchemical lab, a metaphorical particle accelerator wherein 9th graders are transformed into 10th graders and 10th graders metamorphose into almost college-ready juniors and seniors who can talk and read and write quite effectively...
Thursday, March 1, 2012
Parallel Universe
Rewrite this sentence correcting any errors in parallel structure.
James, a young teenager from the ghetto, experienced an exhilarating, soul-searching encounter with God, which he thought was something to cling to, protecting him from the immoral clutches of the Avenue and that would relieve his feelings of despair.
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