Thursday, March 1, 2012

Parallel Universe


Rewrite this sentence correcting any errors in parallel structure.

James, a young teenager from the ghetto, experienced an exhilarating, soul-searching encounter with God, which he thought was something to cling to, protecting him from the immoral clutches of the Avenue and that would relieve his feelings of despair.


Please post by 7:30 am on Friday morning, March 2.